Friday, April 11, 2014

Where do you put the name?

FOUND ONLINE: A rising sophomore from Damascus, Md., Bradshaw welcomes the opportunity.

I like this writer's work, and I realize he likes to put the name after the introductory phrase. But I prefer it this way:

Bradshaw, a rising sophomore from Damascus, Md., welcomes the opportunity.

LINKS: On my web siteI have links to some of my stories online.

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ENTRIES FROM THE DOG BLOG

BLOG ENTRIES FROM THE AUTO RACING JOURNAL
(a book of great stories about the Intimidator)
(the book of great NASCAR stories)

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