Monday, July 18, 2016

Is there a 'said' in there somewhere?

FOUND ONLINE: "What we're going to offer is a different vision, a different way forward, a different set of excitement that's never been seen at a political convention before," Sean Spicer, the RNC's chief strategist on CNN's "New Day" on Friday.

Is there a "said" in there somewhere? I don't see it. I'd move Friday and change it this way:

"What we're going to offer is a different vision, a different way forward, a different set of excitement that's never been seen at a political convention before," said 
RNC chief strategist Sean Spicer on CNN's Friday edition of "New Day."

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