He would have pared well

FOUND ONLINE: He would have pared well with Kenyan Drake. This years draft is deep at running back and Miami may have realized they could add depth in the middle rounds to compliment Drake as well as Frank Gore who they would sign in free agency after the trade rumors died.

That pared well section makes him like a real cutup. This is just one paragraph, and it's full of errors.

He would have paired well with Kenyan Drake. This year's draft is deep at running back, and Miami may have realized they could add depth in the middle rounds to complement Drake. They also signed Frank Gore in free agency after the trade rumors died.

FROM ANOTHER ARTICLE: There’s a lot of hope that the Dolphins will take either Baker Mayfield or Josh Rosen if either are still available by the time Miami picks at 11.

If either IS still available.

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