Monday, December 7, 2015

All those errors

Found online: In all, Virginia forced 19 turnovers and turned those W&M errors into 20 points.

You don't need In all at all. Same with those W&M errors.


Virginia forced 19 turnovers and turned them into 20 points.


That'll work just fine.


By the way, I really like this writer, but I sometimes wish I could edit his writing.


Links: On my web siteI have links to some of my stories.


Check it out: You might look at Funds for Writers, which specializes in grants for writers.
 
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