Sunday, June 26, 2022

LONDON BOROUGH IN NORTH LONDON

FOUND ONLINE: The London Borough of Enfield is a London borough in North London.

The writer hammered home the fact that Enfield is a London borough.

My edit: Enfield is a borough in North London.

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Saturday, June 25, 2022

1992 WAS THE YEAR

FOUND ONLINE: 1992 was the year then-presidential candidate Bill Clinton began describing abortion as a procedure that should be “safe, legal and rare.”

Normally, you don't put a number at the start of a paragraph/sentence. Let's try again.

In 1992, then-presidential candidate Bill Clinton began describing abortion as a procedure that should be “safe, legal and rare.”

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(a book of great stories about the Intimidator)
(the book of great NASCAR stories)