Friday, November 20, 2020

A MAN WHO'S A DRUG SMUGGLER

FOUND ONLINE: They learn from the FBI that the man was involved with a man who's a drug smuggler and that he was going to testify against him and then enter the Witness Protection Program.

Wordy, wordy, wordy. You can cut out nearly half of this sentence.

They learn from the FBI that the man was going to testify against a drug smuggler and then enter the Witness Protection Program.

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Saturday, November 14, 2020

WOULD GIVE DIE FOR YOU

FOUND ON YOUTUBE: TOP 10 DOG BREEDS THAT WOULD GIVE DIE FOR YOU!!!

It looks like the headline writer was trying to say this two different ways. He/she could have said "would die for you" or "would give his life for you."

I like the former.

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Thursday, November 12, 2020

I HAVE BEEN WORKED

 FOUND ON TWITTER: I have been worked on many projects such as MS-Office, Good Typing Speed, Lead Generation,

This writer could have said "I have worked" or "I have been working"...

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(the book of great NASCAR stories)

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