Friday, June 17, 2016

Writing vs. editing


It's funny, but most people
say that I'm better at writing about editing than I am about writing about writing.


They say that writing and editing are different; they're apples and oranges.

And they say they want to learn to write, not edit.

It's true that I write better about editing than I do about writing. I know it well. (I know writing well, too, but stay with me.)

Writing and editing are NOT different; they're two parts of the same process.

Novelist James Michener said that he was an okay writer, but he was a terrific re-writer (I'm paraphrasing here). He got his story/book/whatever down on paper and then went back and edited, edited, edited. And he won the Pulitzer Prize for fiction for his first book, ''Tales of the South Pacific,'' a collection of stories he began while he was in the Navy during World War II.

When I was a newspaper man, I wrote quickly, finished it, then went back and fixed it. If I didn't have time to edit, my writing was OK; if I had time to edit, sometimes it was really well done. (I still write this way; I'm just not a full-time newspaper man.)

Like you, I wanted to be a writer, not an editor. But I learned that I have terrific editing skills, and that makes me a better writer.

Write on.

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Sunday, June 12, 2016

Its so much more than that

FOUND ONLINE: This may look like just another rock, but its so much more than that.

Here, its is short for "it is," so you need an apostrophe.


This may look like just another rock, but it's so much more than that.


ALSO FOUND ONLINE: The thought process for Miami was that Stills would replace the overpaid and loudmouth Mike Wallace as the main deep threat in the Dolphins receiving core.

It's receiving corps, not core.


FOUND AUG. 14, 2016: For it’s size Scotland is way ahead of the rest of Britain on renewable energy, which last year produced 57.4 per cent of the electricity it needs – about three-quarters of that coming from wind.

Here, it's is possessive, not short for it is; so it should be its.


This sentence could use a re-do:

For its size, Scotland is way ahead of the rest of Britain on renewable energy, which last year produced 57.4 per cent of its electricity needs – about three-quarters of that coming from wind.
For it’s size Scotland is way ahead of the rest of Britain on renewable energy, which last year produced 57.4 per cent of the electricity it needs – about three-quarters of that coming from wind.

Read more at: https://inews.co.uk/essentials/news/environment/scotland-produces-wind-energy-needs/
For it’s size Scotland is way ahead of the rest of Britain on renewable energy, which last year produced 57.4 per cent of the electricity it needs – about three-quarters of that coming from wind.

Read more at: https://inews.co.uk/essentials/news/environment/scotland-produces-wind-energy-needs/

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