Wednesday, February 10, 2010

Another choice...

HERE'S ANOTHER CASE of who vs. whom, and I think this one is questionable.

The Vikings, although they won’t say it, need to know Favre’s plans before March 5, when the trading deadline opens, so they would be able to compete with other teams to acquire, for instance, a Donovan McNabb from Philadelphia or a Matt Hasselbeck from Seattle, or whomever they would try to bring in.

I think that whoever they would try to bring in works better. Also, they need to break up that sentence.

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