Wednesday, November 19, 2014

The type of players...

Found online: ... the source claimed "me first guys" are the type of players Miami is trying to avoid.

I'd change that partial sentence to this:

... the source claimed that Miami is trying to avoid "me-first guys."

It's not as awkward.

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