Showing posts with label editing headlines. Show all posts
Showing posts with label editing headlines. Show all posts

Monday, August 8, 2022

NFL MYTH'S

FOUND ONLINE: NFL Myth's So CRAZY They HAVE To Be True...

You don't need the apostrophe.

EDIT: NFL Myths So CRAZY They HAVE To Be True...

FOUND ONLINE: George Conway predicts what FBI was looking for

You don't predict the past.

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Wednesday, October 29, 2014

Deceptive headline (Jackson could be almost anyone)

HEADLINE FOUND ONLINE: Mock GM: Jackson to Eagles, more trades we want to see...

The problem with this headline is Jackson. The Eagles traded DeSean Jackson to the Redskins in the offseason, and I wondered why they'd trade him back to the Eagles in midseason.

They wouldn't. The story is about Vincent Jackson, not DeSean. The headline deceives the reader, and the headline writer should have realized that in advance.

That's the problem with putting names in headlines. If you wrote a story about Emmitt Smith, you'd have to use his full name; too many Smiths out there.

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ENTRIES FROM THE DOG BLOG

BLOG ENTRIES FROM THE AUTO RACING JOURNAL
(a book of great stories about the Intimidator)
(the book of great NASCAR stories)