Thursday, June 6, 2019

I hate stacked modifiers

FOUND ONLINE: Fon Du Lac, Wis.-based hotshot owner-operator Greg Cutler says he can run his gas-fueled 2010 Dodge Ram 2500 at 85 cents per mile, much less than what the average Class 8 operator will spend.

I hate a stacked modifier. I'd move the name to the front and add commas.



Greg Cutler, a Fon Du Lac, Wis.-based hotshot owner-operator, says he can run his gas-fueled 2010 Dodge Ram 2500 at 85 cents per mile, much less than what the average Class 8 operator will spend.

Just so you know, I was looking up the term hotshot trucking.


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