FOUND ONLINE: “I do not think a party centered on President Trump is viable,” said David Asp, a former member of the Republican National Committee from Minnesota.
From Minnesota just doesn't fit with the Republican National Committee. I'd move it.
“I do not think a party centered on President Trump is viable,” said Minnesotan David Asp, a former member of the Republican National Committee.
FROM THE SAME ARTICLE: When Mr. Nixon died in 1994, then-President Bill Clinton praised his “wise counsel,” accomplishments and “devotion to duty,” delivering an eulogy that urged Americans to judge the former president on the “totality” of his life.
I apologize for posting that long sentence here. It's too long, but the main problem is an eulogy. Even though eulogy starts with a vowel, a eulogy sounds right to my ear.
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