NEEDS EDITING: I just found this partial sentence — "...whether or not the game has past him by" — online. The word "past" involves time. I think they want passed here.
OOPS: I just saw a road sign that said Prodcue on one side and Proudce on the other.
In fact, we'd just come back from a Chinese restaurant that had carb rangoon (instead of crab) and sliver beans instead of string beans.
Everyone needs a good editor. I especially like the carb rangoon.
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