"Unlike a brain surgeon, the beautiful part of writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time."
— Robert Cormier
Tuesday, June 26, 2012
Fixing a mangled sentence
Found online:Everyone says they go the extra mile. Almost no actually one does. The first sentence is fine, but you need it for perspective. The second sentence needs help. Everyone says they go the extra mile. Actually, almost no one does.