Tuesday, June 26, 2012

Fixing a mangled sentence

Found online: Everyone says they go the extra mile. Almost no actually one does.

The first sentence is fine, but you need it for perspective. The second sentence needs help.

Everyone says they go the extra mile. Actually, almost no one does.

Contact: I can be reached at tgilli52@gmail.com.

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