Monday, September 16, 2019

Georgia politician for governor

FOUND ONLINE: At their kickoff event in Atlanta on Sunday, they hosted Stacey Abrams, the Georgia politician who won a national following during her unsuccessful run for governor in 2018.

It's a small difference (two words), but you could trim this sentence this way:


At their kickoff event in Atlanta on Sunday, they hosted Stacey Abrams, who won a national during her unsuccessful run for Georgia governor in 2018.

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Sunday, September 1, 2019

Pushed around his team

FOUND ONLINE: Moreover, in each of those three games Pitt had pushed around his team.

It's a minor thing, but I'd rearrange this sentence:

Moreover, in each of those three games Pitt had pushed his team around.

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