Sunday, August 9, 2020

ED YONG EXPLAINS

FOUND ONLINE: “Which is unfortunate because, you see, the immune system is very complicated,” Ed Yongwho also wrote one of our latest cover stories, explains.

Why not say this:

“Which is unfortunate because, you see, the immune system is very complicated,” explains Ed Yongwho also wrote one of our latest cover stories.

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Friday, August 7, 2020

THAT HAS IT

FOUND ONLINE: When it comes to speed, Jakeem Grant and Matt Breida are the two on the Dolphins roster that has it.

This is backwards, and has ought to be have. And that ought to be who.

Jakeem Grant and Matt Breida are the two Dolphins who have speed.

FROM THE SAME STORY: What makes Howard standout is that in his 40 games played, he has 35 passes defensed and 12 interceptions.

Stand out, not standout, works here.

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