Wednesday, May 29, 2019

Sisko plays baseball with Vulcan team

FOUND ON YOUTUBE: Sisko plays baseball with Vulcan team

No, Benjamin Sisko didn't play baseball with a Vulcan team; he played baseball against a Vulcan team.

It's a small difference, but it's important to me. He played baseball with players on the DS9 team.

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Monday, May 20, 2019

James, 21, said

FOUND ONLINE: "We're looking at each other like, 'Is he being serious?' That's a lot of money," salutatorian Robert James, 21, said.

I hate this way of doing attribution, even though I know it's CNN's style. Let's do it again in a way that many (if not most) publications would do it:

"We're looking at each other like, 'Is he being serious?' That's a lot of money," said salutatorian Robert James, 21.

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Blog entries from The Auto Racing Journal
(a book of great stories about the Intimidator)
(the book of great NASCAR stories)