Saturday, October 12, 2019

That's NOT my name

I've found a lot of mistakes on YouTube, but this is one of the worst.

Trump is NUTS After Former Ambassador Ivanovitch Testified Against him: 'They wanted to remove me!'

Her name is NOT Ivanovitch; it's Yovanovitch.

Also, I'd change is to was to match with testified.

Trump was NUTS After Former Ambassador Yovanovitch Testified Against him: 'They wanted to remove me!'

ALSO ON YOUTUBE: Trey Gowdy pumps breaks on joining Trump legal team

He pumped the brakes.

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Friday, October 4, 2019

Since the Great Recession in late July

FOUND ONLINE: The central bank cut rates for the first time since the Great Recession in late July, then followed that up in mid-September, likening the moves to taking out insurance.

It reads like the Great Recession was in late July. There's an easy fix.

In late July, the central bank cut rates for the first time since the Great Recession, then followed that up in mid-September. The bank likened the moves to taking out insurance.

I hate run-on sentences.

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