Thursday, February 21, 2013

It's my preference

I'd edit it: I just found a quote that said this: "Matt (Borland, crew chief) and the guys are assessing the situation."

I'd change it to this: "(Crew chief) Matt (Borland) and the guys are assessing the situation."


It's not a huge change, but I think it's easier to read.

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