Monday, September 21, 2015

Travel the world in

Found online: Meet John. He’s a 75-year-old man who built this awesome tiny house truck for he and his wife to travel the world in.

I don't like the use of he and his wife in this instance, and I don't like ending the sentence with in. So I'd change the last part of the sentence to "so he and his wife can travel the world."

It's not as awkward.

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