But, Gingrich added

FOUND ONLINE: “It's clear Kelly is having a stabilising and organising influence on the White House,” said Newt Gingrich, a former Republican House speaker and informal Trump adviser. But, Gingrich added, “He will gradually have an impact on Trump but it won't be immediate. There are parts of Trump that are almost impossible to manage.”

I'd make a few minor tweaks. I'd get rid of "But," before Gingrich added and move Gingrich added. I'd also add a comma between Trump and but.

Or you could take out "Gingrich added" altogether.

“It's clear Kelly is having a stabilising and organising influence on the White House,” said Newt Gingrich, a former Republican House speaker and informal Trump adviser. “(Kelly) will gradually have an impact on Trump, but it won't be immediate. There are parts of Trump that are almost impossible to manage.”

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