Saturday, November 9, 2019

Harris, a pollster, said in a phone interview

FOUND ONLINE: "Those are folks who have been left out of any economic recovery that the country has been experience," Larry Harris, a pollster at Mason-Dixon, said in a phone interview.

I hate split up attributions. Let's try again.

"Those are folks who have been left out of any economic recovery that the country has been experience," Mason-Dixon pollster Larry Harris said in a phone interview.

It's a stacked modifier, but I think it's better.

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