There are two major mistakes here. Since you said DOGS, you need to say THEIR. And it should be CAME BACK, NOT COMBACK. Actually, there's a third problem; they have a hyphen when they should have a comma.
Abandoned Dogs Waited for THEIR Owner to Return, But They Never Came Back
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