FOUND ONLINE: “In a place like Georgia, there are going to be long lines when the polls close, and many of those people are going to go home,” said Patrick Murray, the director of polling at Monmouth University, who has polled Georgia twice this year.
The writer is trying to do too much here. I'd put a period after University and start another sentence saying that Murray has twice polled Georgia this year.
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