HEADLINE FOUND ONLINE: Experts: They're less dangerous than you think
It sounds like the experts aren't dangerous, but the article is about coyotes. I suspect they wanted to use a subhead to get the coyotes in there, but we didn't see it.
If they had substituted COYOTES ARE for THEY'RE, it would have worked.
Don't feel bad; I've messed up headlines, too.
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