Monday, December 27, 2021

DANGEROUS EXPERTS?

HEADLINE FOUND ONLINE: Experts: They're less dangerous than you think

It sounds like the experts aren't dangerous, but the article is about coyotes. I suspect they wanted to use a subhead to get the coyotes in there, but we didn't see it.

If they had substituted COYOTES ARE for THEY'RE, it would have worked.

Don't feel bad; I've messed up headlines, too.

EMAIL: tgilli52@gmail.com  TWITTER: EDITORatWORK

ENTRIES FROM THE DOG BLOG

BLOG ENTRIES FROM THE AUTO RACING JOURNAL
(a book of great stories about the Intimidator)
(the book of great NASCAR stories)

No comments:

Post a Comment