DOUBLE CREW CHIEF

FOUND ON WIKIPEDIA: He served as crew chief for two decades, winning a championship with Benny Parsons in 1973.^[1] Carter was the winning crew chief when Parsons won the 1975 Daytona 500.

You COULD do it this way:

He served as crew chief for two decades, winning a championship in 1973 and the 1975 Daytona 500, both with Benny Parsons.

I found the word chlamydia on Twitter and had to look it up. 

Chlamydia is a common STD (sexually transmitted disease) that can cause infection among both men and women. It can cause permanent damage to a woman’s reproductive system.

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