Showing posts with label newspaper attribution. Show all posts
Showing posts with label newspaper attribution. Show all posts

Wednesday, November 9, 2022

GRANDE, 58, TOLD CNN

FOUND ONLINE ON CNN: “It certainly exceeded our expectations of a major hurricane,” Grande, 58, told CNN.

I don't know why they need to get CNN in there. Why not say ," said Grande, 58?

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ENTRIES FROM THE DOG BLOG

BLOG ENTRIES FROM THE AUTO RACING JOURNAL
(a book of great stories about the Intimidator)
(the book of great NASCAR stories)

Friday, April 10, 2020

SAID IN AN INTERVIEW

FOUND ONLINE: “He likes to say, ‘Well, the governors messed up,’ and ‘China lied to me,’ and all this other stuff,” Bob Shrum, the director of the Center for the Political Future at the University of Southern California, said in an interview.

I hate it when writers break up attribution like this, and why do we need to know that this was in an interview? Let's try again:

“He likes to say, ‘Well, the governors messed up,’ and ‘China lied to me,’ and all this other stuff,” said Bob Shrum, the director of the Center for the Political Future at the University of Southern California.

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ENTRIES FROM THE DOG BLOG

BLOG ENTRIES FROM THE AUTO RACING JOURNAL
(a book of great stories about the Intimidator)
(the book of great NASCAR stories)