Showing posts with label novel writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label novel writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, October 19, 2021

WAS HEARD

FOUND IN A NOVEL: Neither line was heard by Qwilleran.

Alternative: Qwilleran heard neither line.

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Saturday, July 10, 2021

HELD THE POSITION

FOUND IN A NOVEL: The Commissioner was Wilson Roth. He had held the position for two and a half years...

There's a simple way to fix this.

Wilson Roth had been the commissioner for two and a half years...

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(a book of great stories about the Intimidator)
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