Friday, April 10, 2020

SAID IN AN INTERVIEW

FOUND ONLINE: “He likes to say, ‘Well, the governors messed up,’ and ‘China lied to me,’ and all this other stuff,” Bob Shrum, the director of the Center for the Political Future at the University of Southern California, said in an interview.

I hate it when writers break up attribution like this, and why do we need to know that this was in an interview? Let's try again:

“He likes to say, ‘Well, the governors messed up,’ and ‘China lied to me,’ and all this other stuff,” said Bob Shrum, the director of the Center for the Political Future at the University of Southern California.

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Monday, March 30, 2020

IT WAS REVEAL

FOUND ONLINE: Burr, the North Carolina Republican who heads the Senate Intelligence Committee, attracted public scrutiny after it was reveal he decided to sell between $628,000 and $1.7 million in stocks weeks before the full awareness of the crisis became public.

I think they meant revealed.

ALSO FOUND ONLINE: Those happen to be the organizations that responds to public health threats.

Organizations RESPOND. You don't need the 's'.

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ENTRIES FROM THE DOG BLOG

BLOG ENTRIES FROM THE AUTO RACING JOURNAL
(a book of great stories about the Intimidator)
(the book of great NASCAR stories)