Saturday, May 3, 2014

Whomever is under center

FOUND ONLINE: The third Aggie in a row to come off the board, the Vikings look to pair the big receiver with their No. 1 pick (well, one of them) from 2013, Cordarelle Patterson, to create a dynamic duo for whomever is under center when the 2014 season starts.

This needs some help. The first part of the sentence doesn't mention a person (Mike Evans, in this case), and it's whoever not whomever.

With Evans becoming the third Aggie in a row to come off the board, the Vikings look to pair the big receiver with their No. 1 pick (well, one of them) from 2013, Cordarelle Patterson, to create a dynamic duo for whoever is under center when the 2014 season starts.

ALSO FOUND ONLINE: According to CBSSports.com, "some Dolphins coaches aren't fans" of wide receiver Mike Wallace, whom was signed to a massive $60 million dollar contract in 2013.

Whom should be who here, and you don't need to say that a $60-million-dollar contract is massive. Readers can tell.

According to CBSSports.com, "some Dolphins coaches aren't fans" of wide receiver Mike Wallace, who was signed to a $60-million-dollar contract in 2013.

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