HEADLINE FOUND ON AP: No survivors found after plane that flew over DC and led to fighter jet scramble crashes in Virginia
As written, it looks like the jet scramble crashes in Virginia. If you leave the flying over DC and the jet scramble out, the headline reads:No survivors found after plane crashes in Virginia
And I think that'll work just fine. You'll get more detail in the story.
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