HEADLINE FOUND ONLINE: Libya buries thousands after deadly floods that killed at least 5,100
I'd rewrite this:
At least 5,100 dead after flooding in Libya
You don't need to say deadly floods. That's obviously redundant.
FOUND ONLINE: RUDY GIULIANI SPIRILING OUT OF CONTROL.
It's SPIRALING.
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