Friday, September 15, 2023

BURIES THOUSANDS

HEADLINE FOUND ONLINE: Libya buries thousands after deadly floods that killed at least 5,100

I'd rewrite this:

At least 5,100 dead after flooding in Libya

You don't need to say deadly floods. That's obviously redundant.

FOUND ONLINE: RUDY GIULIANI SPIRILING OUT OF CONTROL.

It's SPIRALING.

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