Showing posts with label business writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label business writing. Show all posts

Monday, December 5, 2016

We sale cars

FOUND ONLINE: The automotive group already owns dealership near the intersection that sale the Buick, GMC, Cadillac and Lexus brands.

Actually, someone else found this in a business story online. Is there a dealership or more than one dealership near the intersection? And I wonder how the writer AND editor could have allowed sale to fly here. They sell cars; they don't sale them. 

So: The automotive group already owns a dealership near the intersection that sells the Buick, GMC, Cadillac and Lexus brands.


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ENTRIES FROM THE DOG BLOG

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(the book of great NASCAR stories)

Sunday, September 4, 2016

Your savings isn't

FOUND ONLINE: Ultimately, your savings isn't just going to help you retire; it will help you comfortably step away from work sooner — and not just for a day.

To me, it would be savings aren't, not savings isn't.

Ultimately, your savings aren't just going to help you retire; they will help you comfortably step away from work sooner — and not just for a day.

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ENTRIES FROM THE DOG BLOG

BLOG ENTRIES FROM THE AUTO RACING JOURNAL
(a book of great stories about the Intimidator)
(the book of great NASCAR stories)