Showing posts with label good writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label good writing. Show all posts

Sunday, December 29, 2019

IT'S SO-CALLED MAGIC POWERS

FOUND ONLINE: The caveat here is, if a supplement, tea, or other “wellness product” claims it reduces inflammation, you might want to be skeptical of it’s so-called magic powers.

It's is normally a contraction for it is. Here, you don't need an apostrophe. It's just its.

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Sunday, January 26, 2014

Burned dry

Found in a novel: The sweat burned dry on my skin before it had a chance to form into beads.

Normally, I'd change burned dry on my skin to simply dried on my skin. But I think burned dry illustrates what the author is trying to convey, the extreme heat of the Arizona desert.

I like it the way it is: burned dry.

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ENTRIES FROM THE DOG BLOG

BLOG ENTRIES FROM THE AUTO RACING JOURNAL
(a book of great stories about the Intimidator)
(the book of great NASCAR stories)