Monday, March 21, 2011

Awkward sentence

Let's rewrite this awkward sentence just found online:

Williams said he has no magic cure to ensure another slow start by Carolina won't happen tonight.

Let's try again:

Williams said he can't ensure that North Carolina won't have another slow start tonight.

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