I'd be more than tempted to cut out that second sentence, since it says the same in the first sentence.
I will say this: Crash Davis from Bull Durham would have loved this rookie; he knows his cliches. "I just want to help the team. We just play them one game at a time."
And don't think; it'll only hurt the team.
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