Passed out in a plant...

Found online: Hill is more experienced in Sumlin's system after learning under Manziel and Joeckel last season, but he was arrested in March for underage drinking (after being found passed out in a plant)...

I wonder what kind of plant it was, a manufacturing plant, a rhododendron or a venus fly trap.

Actually, it turns out he was in front of a bar. From another story: Hill was passed out alone in a planter full of rocks and plants in front of the restaurant-bar when officers arrived, police said in the arrest report.

Actually, that sentence could use some help. I'd probably cut out "when officers arrived" and let the "police said" handle that.

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