Tuesday, June 20, 2017

Right of passage

FOUND ONLINE: Late on Wednesday it was almost like a right of passage or an initiation for DeVante Parker.

Sigh. It's rite of passage.


FROM THE SAME STORY: Xavien Howard who was taxed to cover him has also held his own at times.


It's tasked, not taxed. Also, I'd put commas after Howard and him.


Xavien Howard, who was tasked to cover him, has also held his own at times.


I'd probably just say "who had to cover him."

YET ANOTHER ERROR: With so many new players on defense this can serve well in an effort to get everyone accustomed to one and other.

The writer meant one another, not one and other.

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