The writer is trying to do too much with one sentence/paragraph. I'd split it up. Also, I'm not sure that cabinet needs to be uppercase.
Handel and Ossoff are vying for the seat vacated by Tom Price, who had held it since 2005. Price joined Trump's cabinet as health and human services secretary earlier this year.
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