Sure up the offensive line

FOUND ONLINE: However, they still need a few more components to sure up the offensive line going forward. 

I think the writer meant shore up, not sure up.

FROM THE SAME ARTICLE: This is a position that could be filled in either free agency or in the draft next year.

Wordy, wordy, wordy.

This position could be filled in either free agency or in next year's draft.

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