Win first World Series

FOUND ONLINE: Astros beat Dodgers to win first World Series

I was searching for information on the World Series, and this was one of the first stories I found online. It caught my eye because the Astros didn't win the first World Series. In the first World Series, held in 1903, the Boston Americans beat the Philadelphia Athletics five games to three.

What the headline writer was trying to say was the Astros played in their first World Series and won it. They could have said this:

Astros beat Dodgers, take their first World Series title

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