Showing posts with label magazine writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label magazine writing. Show all posts

Friday, July 13, 2018

More information in my stories

In early 1985, I was moving from Hendersonville, N.C., to Wilmington, N.C., and I was reading my first Jerry Hooks column. Jerry was the sports editor of the Wilmington Star-News, and he was my new boss.

Jerry had written a column about UNC Wilmington basketball and Mel Gibson. I didn't know what actor Mel Gibson had to do with UNCW basketball, and I didn't find a clue in Hooks's column.


I later learned that Gibson was a tall man, and he was then the UNCW men's basketball coach. Years earlier, he'd backed up hall-of-famer Jerry West for the Los Angeles Lakers.

I filed what I'd learned; sometimes you need more explanation.


Later, still with the Star-News, I wrote a column on a Wilmington kid who was going to play offensive tackle for Wake Forest. I was at the YMCA the next day, and a woman I knew from the gym said that my column was nicely written.


Then she added, "What's Wake Forest?"


I told her that it was a major university in Winston-Salem, N.C. She wondered why I didn't say that in the column, and I told her that it was assumed the reader would know that Hoggard, New Hanover and Laney were Wilmington high schools and that North Carolina, Wake Forest, Duke and N.C. State were universities in North Carolina.


All newspapers and magazines have their styles, of course. Some will cut out "University of" if you write University of North Carolina.


For the last few years, though, I've added "University of" to North Carolina or "High School" after a local high school when I was writing a magazine story. The editors might cut it out ... or they might leave it; thus, the reader would have a little more information.


It would be their call.

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Saturday, February 13, 2016

Close enough to fit

TIGHT FIT: Several years ago, a magazine editor wanted me to write an obituary for a great race-car driver who had just died.

He said he wanted 300 words, and I knew that would be tough. Six hundred words would have been easier.

I researched the subject and wrote the article. I wrote and cut, wrote and cut. It was about 360 words, and I pruned. I probably cut out the weakest anecdote in the article, and it was around 320 words.


I kept looking for ways to tighten it. Finally, I got down to 311 words. I worked a bit longer but couldn't find another word to cut. Frustrated, I sent it in and apologized to Larry; I couldn't meet his goal of 300 words.

He read it and wrote back, "That's perfect."

I realized that he didn't want it exactly 300 words; he wanted something in the ballpark. Since every word was needed, he had no complaints.

FIND IT HERE: OOPS! Remembering Louise Smith

UPDATE: More recently, an editor gave me a story assignment of 725 to 775 words. I apologized when I sent a 785-word story. He said there were no worries; it would fit.

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BLOG ENTRIES FROM THE AUTO RACING JOURNAL
(a book of great stories about the Intimidator)
(the book of great NASCAR stories)