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Friday, July 13, 2018

More information in my stories

In early 1985, I was moving from Hendersonville, N.C., to Wilmington, N.C., and I was reading my first Jerry Hooks column. Jerry was the sports editor of the Wilmington Star-News, and he was my new boss.

Jerry had written a column about UNC Wilmington basketball and Mel Gibson. I didn't know what actor Mel Gibson had to do with UNCW basketball, and I didn't find a clue in Hooks's column.


I later learned that Gibson was a tall man, and he was then the UNCW men's basketball coach. Years earlier, he'd backed up hall-of-famer Jerry West for the Los Angeles Lakers.

I filed what I'd learned; sometimes you need more explanation.


Later, still with the Star-News, I wrote a column on a Wilmington kid who was going to play offensive tackle for Wake Forest. I was at the YMCA the next day, and a woman I knew from the gym said that my column was nicely written.


Then she added, "What's Wake Forest?"


I told her that it was a major university in Winston-Salem, N.C. She wondered why I didn't say that in the column, and I told her that it was assumed the reader would know that Hoggard, New Hanover and Laney were Wilmington high schools and that North Carolina, Wake Forest, Duke and N.C. State were universities in North Carolina.


All newspapers and magazines have their styles, of course. Some will cut out "University of" if you write University of North Carolina.


For the last few years, though, I've added "University of" to North Carolina or "High School" after a local high school when I was writing a magazine story. The editors might cut it out ... or they might leave it; thus, the reader would have a little more information.


It would be their call.

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Saturday, May 7, 2011

Advice for journalists

For years, I covered sporting events, usually auto racing, although you'd see me covering football, basketball, baseball, golf and even bodybuilding. I wrote features and game stories, and it was a battle for me. If I hurried, my writing was a mess. If I had time to edit, it could shine.

Which means that I am a typical professional writer. Sometimes I'd be 30 or 45 minutes ahead of time, but, usually, I'm fighting the clock and the editor in my head "looking over my shoulder."


I just start writing; I don't have time for writer's block. I need a lead, of course. I'll put a so-called Associated Press lead (Joe Schmoe scored 24 points, including the last five, as So-And-So beat...). I'll often find a better lead in the middle of my story, so I'll move it to the top, and work the old lead into the story.


I always write by the number of words. If a story needs to be 500 words, I write 550. Then I tighten it to 480 and write some more. Then I cut it to 500 again. I'm always adding more information and finding ways to tighten and improve. If I have time, great. If not, well, I'll do my best.


Two things: Be on time, and get your facts right. After that, everything else will fall into place.



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