Sunday, August 26, 2012

Landing sight

Found online: If the landing sight were a baseball field and the LEM landed on the pitcher’s mound, the astronauts never got out of the infield — except for a brief detour Armstrong made to North Crater in shallow right field. 

The problem is landing sight. It ought to be landing site. It's an easy mistake to make, I guess, but a good editor should catch it.

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Saturday, August 25, 2012

Whomever lands

MORE WHOMEVER: But whomever lands the No. 6 job will likely give it up when Mike Neal returns after his four-game suspension.

Yes, whomever doesn't cut it here. Go with But whoever lands the No. 6 job ... 

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