Friday, December 3, 2010

Both of whom redshirted

I JUST FOUND A SENTENCE that bothers me.

Here's the end of it ... as well as freshmen Michael Strauss and Miles Gooch, both of whom redshirted this fall.

Instead of both of whom redshirted this fall, I might use who both redshirted this fall.

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