Saturday, April 16, 2011

Small edit

This sentence needs a small edit:

Albert Pujols and Lance Berkman each hit homers in consecutive at-bats, while Yadier Molina had four hits — all singles — and starter Kyle Lohse singled, too.

You don't need to say that Pujols and Berkman each hit homers in consecutive at-bats. They homered in consecutive at-bats.

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