Monday, July 29, 2013

Their head and face

Found online: Their head and face are wrinkled with whiskers on the snout.

I'd change this sentence this way:

Their heads and faces are wrinkled, with whiskers on the snout.

I believe this is a description of the manatee, but it sounds like me. I have wrinkles and whiskers, too.

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