Monday, May 9, 2016

Severe ties

FOUND ONLINE: The Dolphins can severe all ties and move on.

I'm pretty sure the writer meant sever, not severe.

ALSO FOUND ONLINE: He’s a player who catches the ball more with his body than with his hands, and that’s a big deal in the NFL. That type of player has a good chance of struggling with drops when all is said and done

Wordy. Let's try it again.

He catches the ball more with his body than with his hands, and he's likely to struggle with drops during his career. 

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