The ocean submerged it

FOUND ONLINE: There’s no doubt we’ve all heard of the legend of Atlantis, the ancient, once great city that was lost when the ocean submerged it.

Did the ocean submerge Atlantis, or was the mythical city submerged in the ocean?

There’s no doubt we’ve all heard of the legend of Atlantis, the ancient, once great city that was lost when it was submerged in the ocean.

ALSO FOUND ONLINE: Thankfully these two young ladies sprung into action to save him, or at least attempt to.

I think they meant sprang into action.

Thankfully these two young ladies sprang into action to save him, or at least attempted to help. 

CONTACT: Email me at tgilli52@gmail.com or nc3022@yahoo.com. Also, my Twitter handle is EDITORatWORK.

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