Thursday, May 18, 2017

They will sight

FOUND ONLINE: Many people may be shocked to see Thomas so low on this list. They will sight his 24 touchdowns in two seasons while under then offensive coordinator Adam Gase in Denver.

The writer obviously meant cite, not sight.

ALSO FOUND ONLINE: The Miami Dolphins were a team that surprised a lot of people last season, earning one of the AFC’s Wild Card spot.

We can tighten this. 

The Miami Dolphins surprised a lot of people last season, earning one of the AFC’s Wild Card spot.

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